Very Rough Cut

Very Rough Cut from Kieran Brooks on Vimeo.

Film Improvements

Remove car sounds

Add dialogue scenes + news reports for narrative exposition and characterisation

More sound effects

Bus stop scene – Strobe lights in pinnacle and sound effects

Start with disruption, then create pace and drama to separate parts

We need to stop being precious with our footage as we won't be able to fit it all in

Good elements

Lots of good shots, but needs to be more like a trailer

Music creates atmosphere

Lots of enigma, too many

Add more colour filters such as Chroma key to wash out certain colours

Obvious people are dead and the world is desolated

On top if this we will be changing the title of the film trailer, 'Skylapse' was just a prototype to test if the font worked and if it fitted in well with the film. We have also been filming recently to add more action shots within the film, change some of the footage and correct some of the criticisms which were received.